<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二六年二月下社課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用平水韻七陽韻作七言絕句，至少兩首</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊頭題字 ：謝宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集簡評 ：唐嘉誠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇編輯 ：趙以順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【唐嘉誠】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午正月初六，返大豐大面坡修繕高祖母羅氏墓塋</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">追遠(yuǎn)多言思露霜，睹之坍塌掛心腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而今窀穸安塋后，世代兒孫冢焚黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百年卜葬在石梁，懿德昭然姓字香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">好識箕裘千載舊，螽斯振羽憶流芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：拙作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙學(xué)鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">除夕前帶母出游</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一歲蹉跎愿未償，歸來羞自說昂揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世間無限春回意，不及親情伴暖陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：時(shí)人有“平生最怕讀鄭詩”之句，椿萎萱盛，多多盡孝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">年后開工日房車夜宿貴陽遇雷夜</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醒醉人生兩不僵，添些風(fēng)雨又何妨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵枕上回頭看，俱在倉惶夢一場。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：世事渾如蕉鹿夢，雪泥鴻爪空太息。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【謝 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午谷日有懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新正有假放丞郎，白屋營生鎮(zhèn)日忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衙職尚能求五斗，民勤仍不濟(jì)饑腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評： 諸般因稻粟，凡百為飯茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午正月九日與久違同學(xué)小飲</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">零落江湖各自忙，飛蓬失路意惶惶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萍蹤會(huì)處頻澆酒，唯憶青春不帶傷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：同窗共硯成過往，相逢談笑飲一觴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">兒回家過年</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">謀生赴遠(yuǎn)昨還鄉(xiāng)，笑語盈盈慰北堂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只道樽溫爐火暖，不言人事半分霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">兒年后返崗</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望斷車塵意未央，倚門惟嘆路茫茫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">無由竟自歸期數(shù)，悄拭腮邊淚一行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：鄉(xiāng)土中國即將消失在我們的視野里面，年前的滿心喜悅與年后的冷清寂靜以及終日盼歸，形成強(qiáng)烈對比，如此巨大的反差，一個(gè)家庭的縮影，映射了整個(gè)華夏，多是如此。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受剛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">兒時(shí)元夜追燈</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">元夜魚龍燈燭光，男兒亦可扮紅裝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿頭珠翠輕施粉，跌進(jìn)溫柔富貴鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朝賀燈班走四方，毛毛細(xì)雨亦奔忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">追燈追到天將亮，不洗泥巴就上床。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：《遵義府志》載：“上元時(shí)，鄉(xiāng)人以扮燈為樂。用姣童，作時(shí)世裝，隨月逐家，雙雙踏歌，和以音樂，艷以燈火，抑揚(yáng)俯仰，極態(tài)增妍，謂之鬧元宵”。老人記性極好，孩童時(shí)代之事尚且回憶這么清楚，為您點(diǎn)贊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙以順】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">盼開學(xué)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屏前坐久興飛揚(yáng)，軟語嚴(yán)詞總不當(dāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只盼春風(fēng)催課業(yè)，好將頑劣付師堂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒假悠悠何奈長，白天昏睡夜飛揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿聞早啟書堂鼓，可校時(shí)鐘返正常。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：言辭之間，終日希冀，神獸“歸籠”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周大中】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">題《風(fēng)中牡丹》圖</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青洇淡綠染天香，占盡春光冠洛陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縱使風(fēng)來不改色，丹心永駐自清狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：“花之富貴者也”，亦有清高一面，不盡為庸脂俗粉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">觀仁軍主席攝影作品</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾把相思付夕陽，而今攝影鏡留香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩成仍是春風(fēng)筆，夢里蒹葭韻幾行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：長焦端距，都為詩情。攝影留存，俱作畫意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">人日返崗，沿途見油菜花</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新正已見菜花黃，錦緞鋪成富貴妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艷李秾桃輸氣概，低眉俯首拜君王。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：桃李淺俗，終輸其眼。低眉俯首，最是動(dòng)人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">聽《夢駝鈴》</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">破碎山河秋海棠，風(fēng)沙萬里莽蒼蒼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">駝鈴陣陣肝腸斷，誰在高峰望故鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：生于憂患，死于安樂。憶苦思甜，不忘歷史。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">正月初三日，萬峰林游人如織</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">油菜斑斕錦繡裝，福田種在納灰莊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">城巴佬慕鄉(xiāng)巴佬，春色全都家里藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：巧用城巴佬一網(wǎng)絡(luò)新詞，以新意入詩，卻不違和，不失為一佳語。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【枕 云】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二十八日口號</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">怒飛導(dǎo)彈下穹蒼，太息神權(quán)一霎亡。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百載經(jīng)營終是夢，哀兵四處泣凄惶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">硝煙飄散雨蒼黃，寒夜雞鳴望斷腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逝去一人天下白，群黎好譜自由章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">評：應(yīng)當(dāng)歡喜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【祝西峰】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">詠春三章</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叢叢花樹滿園芳，桃李棠梨次第香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠柳婆娑春最早，梢頭閣影夕陽黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柔風(fēng)細(xì)雨又晴光，雪樣櫻桃火樣棠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">已是春庭生意滿，家花堪比野花香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花艷艷菜花黃，影落春溪共水長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">帶得愁心千嶂外，相思總是在家鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：他鄉(xiāng)縱有當(dāng)頭月，不抵家鄉(xiāng)一盞燈。家鄉(xiāng)的四季風(fēng)景，各有千秋。只是棠梨花是否這段時(shí)間開放？記憶中是在三月下旬或四月初，這里可以斟酌下。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周國慶】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春來</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東風(fēng)吹過柳絲長。懶看群花競吐芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可嘆人如牛馬累，為誰辛苦為誰忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隴頭一片菜花黃。卻是新顏著舊妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相顧索然無意趣，幾人翹首盼晴光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：第一首，一生牛馬不得閑，得閑已與青山眠。第二首，年年菜花皆如此，的是新人著舊裝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【劉先倫】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午元夜歸家不得</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨打紗窗詠夜長，客心冷落對流觴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今朝不喜花開早，寂寞孤星夜未央。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故園西向幾回望，山路崎嶇千疊浪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我有歸心歸不去，春風(fēng)帶雨共悲愴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：合家團(tuán)圓，點(diǎn)燈上亮。課徒在身，更無良方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【廖德勛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午客地大年有感依韻和先倫兄</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斷續(xù)雨絲寒意長，客中炮仗勸孤觴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喧囂盼得須臾靜，思接山鄉(xiāng)故宅旁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奔五而今困異鄉(xiāng)，難知天命意彷徨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大年獨(dú)在冷街過，炮仗越隆心越愴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：我與兄同屬一類人也，可親依舊是家山啊！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午元宵未歸</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">客在他鄉(xiāng)望故鄉(xiāng)，相思最是半山房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅花數(shù)點(diǎn)吟夜永，一架詩書一壺觴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">評：詩書相伴過元宵，也是好事一樁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午新正春日</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)輕雨細(xì)杏桃芳，柳綠山溪沐暖陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">快去村前油嫩地，好將麗影趁花香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);">評：莫辜負(fù)眼前季節(jié)，趁春光好，踏春在即。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(128, 128, 128);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p>
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