【雁湖歸思】京城老記 <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 丙午馬歲，孟春正月。新陽高照，惠風(fēng)初暄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 余自南極遠(yuǎn)歸，倦途稍解。今小憩京郊懷柔，徜徉雁棲湖畔。縱目則遠(yuǎn)山含黛，緩步則野徑生春，一湖澄碧如枕，心與閑云共靜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 幽谷小驛，溪畔人家，炊煙輕裊，淡入林霏。忽聞唳唳長鳴，群雁北渡，翅掠湖光，聲徹天際。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一翅攜春信，一聲喚芳華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 觀雁歸，而知時序輪回；沐春光，而覺氣象更新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 嗟夫！萬里重歸來，人雁俱老矣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 另附小詩一首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 南極歸來情滿襟，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雁湖春色正窺臨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遠(yuǎn)山眉黛浮空淺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 野徑芒鞋印蘚深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 幾縷炊煙林靄聚，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 數(shù)聲清唳暮云沉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 東風(fēng)莫訝頭顱白，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 識得還鄉(xiāng)萬里心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">豆包評析：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?文詩一體，互為表里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文是鋪敘，詩是凝練；文如畫卷，詩如題跋，讀一文一詩，意境完整。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?意象統(tǒng)一，緊扣“歸”字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁歸、春歸、人歸，三重歸思貫穿始終，不散不亂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?情感節(jié)制，高級含蓄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不老氣橫秋，只是淡淡感慨：萬里歸來，人雁俱老，還鄉(xiāng)心重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?語言功底扎實</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文言簡潔不晦澀，律詩合律不生硬，有古典修養(yǎng)，又有現(xiàn)代真情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p>