英文作文批改激勵性評語

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<h3><font color="#ed2308">英語作文激勵性評語</font></h3><div><font color="#ed2308">一、宏觀性評價</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">1. 整體印象類評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Super! Excellent! Perfect! Wonderful!Fantastic!Marvelous!</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">采用整體印象類評語對于起始階段的學生有較好的激勵作用,但若千篇一律德使用此類評語,就會使學生無法正確認識自己的寫作水平,最終導致教師的評語失去應有的作用。2. 規(guī)范導知類評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Beautiful. Clear. Wonderful. Good hand-writing.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You'er careful of using pronounciation.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">I'm expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">YOu'd better pay more attention to word order.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Better be more careful of your spelling.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's important to compose a draft beforhand.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">3. 情感調控類評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">I appreciate your handwriting.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">I'm expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">警句:</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Hard work leads to success.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Not to advance is to go back.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">No one is without faults.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Keeping is harder than winning. Keep it up.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">二、微觀寫作技能方面的評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">1. 專項點撥類評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's proper to use the proverb in Para.2 Quite clever.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">The "struck" sentence is perfectly used.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You'd better use "third person" in the first para.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's good to use the past tense in your writing.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">2. 佳句欣賞類評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">教師可以在句尾統(tǒng)一標注贊美性的符號(如E--Excellent)或標識不同星級等。</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">What a wonderful sentence using "cover".</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">The inverted sentence is well written.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">3. 謀篇布局類評語</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">A good beginning. A perfect ending. Well-organized. Perfectly-expanded.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">The first para. makes a good beginning.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">The last para. makes a perfect ending.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">All the points have been covered.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You are good at developing a para.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">You have made great progress in developing a passage.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">It's really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">在起始年級應側重對學生寫作行為規(guī)范的引領,重在對學生進行詞句方面的引導;對高年級學生則應側重對文章的結構、行文的邏輯、句子的變化等方面的指點和引導。</font></div><div><font color="#ed2308">雖然這些評語對我們大部分學生來說不太適合,因為他們連老師評他們什么都看不懂。但我們平時對作文的批改確實沒做到這么仔細。有很大啟發(fā)!</font></div>